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{WoBS} The song that must be whispered

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captain-stream (OTHER SIDE MARKINGS) by captain-stream


Newest update/additions:


:new: 8 . 31 . 2015 | Updated app art.

Previous updates/Additions:


8 . 18 . 2015 | Updated turn ons/turn offs, Added "Skills" section.
8 . 04 . 2015 | Updated pieces of her history.
7 . 31 . 2015 | Edited relationships with Iceclaw, Hailstar, Brackenfall, Antlerkit, Stonestep, Copperheart, Honeywing. Added slots for characters she is currently roleplaying with.
7 . 20 . 2015 | Edited relationships, edited her quote, added her ear scar + explanation, various other changes made.
6 . 22 . 2015 | Whispersong's Application sheet + her description have now been updated fully! |
6 . 21 . 2015 | Whisperpaw is now Whispersong!
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|| General Information ||




Name || Whisperkit / Whisperpaw / Whispersong
Previous names: Whisperkit, Whisperpaw
Breakdown||
{Whisper} - Referencing how silent her paws are when stalking her prey, making her a great predator.
{Song} - Referencing the melodic way that she moves when hunting.
Age || 19.5 moons
Gender || Female
Rank || Warrior
Past ranks || Kit, Apprentice

Clan || RiverClan
Belief in StarClan || 5
"As an apprentice, I believed in StarClan without questioning it. After my accident... I don't believe that they've been looking out for me anymore. Do they even really exist? Is it really just a kit's tale?"

:new:Health status ||
[ Physical ]
7/10 - After her recent accident, her body has been easier to grow tired, and it aches after long periods of small work.

[ Mental ]
4/10 - Due to many reasons, she may be prone to snap when someone strikes up conversation with her.



|| History ||





{Kithood} 0-6 moons
When Whisperpaw was Whisperkit, she was born into the clan as a singular kit in her litter; her mother spoiled her quite a bit. Since she was the first kit Spiritwind (mother) had ever kitted, she was treated greatly, and got great amounts of love from her mother. Whisperkit had never met her father. Back then, she would hear tales from Spiritwind that were disguised stories about her father, which she didn't learn about until she was at least 3 moons old. She heard great things about him, such as how he was marvelous at hunting, how he was strong, and brave. According to her mother; she had her father's eyes, and his bravery. Whisperkit slowly grew to partially resent her father, and would ask things like "why isn't he here?" and "can I see him?", and Spiritwind would always give the same answer. Whisperkit's father was a rogue that her mother had known. It would seem that he didn't join the clan because he didn't want to leave his free life, or he couldn't join because he was a rogue and he wasn't cut out for it. Regardless, Whisperkit frequently asked, and slowly became frustrated by it. Why couldn't he come to visit? Why couldn't she see him? Whisperkit shut herself away, and eventually, stopped asking. She tried to just forget about it. Who cares, anyways? It's just a mouse-brain who happened to be with Spiritwind when she became pregnant with her. That's honestly what she was led to believe, anyways.
That day came rather abruptly. When Whisperkit was only two moons shy of finally being an apprentice, her mother drowned in the river; her body wasn't fully recovered, but there was many signs hinting at signs of struggle. Her mother was murdered, as the other clan cats had said. But... Who had murdered her? That question clung to the little kit's fur, and her entire personality morphed into something different.

{Apprentice} 6-16 moons
Whisperpaw was trained by the great Koishine; the one cat that she could trust. Originally, she was skeptical of the she-cat, but grew to like her. Koishine taught her how to hunt and swim, and helped her conquer her subtle fear of water. During her apprentice moons, she barely spoke to anyone; she had a run in with an apprentice named Amberpaw(wood), and was quite rude towards her after crashing into her. The two of them had a race, and then chased a rabbit into ThunderClan's territory; where they were ill-fated to meet the deputy of their clan, Hailstep(star). They got quite a good scolding, and Whisperpaw decided that the she-cat was quite troublesome. After that, she learned respect for the other clan's boundaries, and made note to keep away from the territories of the other groups. Her apprentice moons flew by after that, and she made little to no friends. The only people that she grew to trust was Koishine and Lilypaw(bird) after a battle-training session. Even then, Whisperpaw doesn't know Lilybird well enough to trust her fully, leaving Koishine as her only close friend. She also met Copperpaw(heart) on the sunning rocks when Koishine became ill with greencough, and partially confided in him. It made the weight of her mentor's sickness easier to bare. During this time, she refused a temporary mentor, despite urges from clanmates. She held her training off for the time that it took for her mentor to recover.
Very late into her apprentice-hood, as leaf-bare was beginning to lift its mark, the clan was still struggling with food. She had a lot of knowledge on land hunting! They should have been utilizing her skills, as she had thought. The sunning rocks were slick and slippery with ice, and Thornstar had ordered all cats to stay away from the rocks. Whisperpaw ignored his orders and went anyways, and while trying to watch some smaller creatures, slipped down the rocks. She broke/fractured a bone in one of her legs, and was beat-up really bad. Someone saved her from nearly drowning, but as she was unconscious, she's unaware of who that was.
After that... She spent a lot of the time recovering in the medicine cat's den. As punishment for doing something so reckless, on top of her healing time, she was sentenced to have a late warrior ceremony by RiverClan's leader. This had all happened just as she was about to finally finish training, too... It was terrible for her. The apprentice was frustrated and bitter for the 4 moons that she was held back for, but her ceremony finally came.

( If you would like your cat added into the history of her apprenticehood, comment below! I may have left out some experiences that I would like to add. )

:new:{Warrior} 16-? moons
As a warrior, Whispersong tried to open up more towards other cats. She became quite fond of Lilybird's kits, and even visits them in the nursery quite often. During one of her visits... She found out about Koishine's unborn kits, Hailstep--now Hailstar, and everything else. In her fury when she saw the sight of the two during the flood, she accidentally drowned Hailstar, taking one of his lives. Whispersong was devastated. Her only close friend had told someone else before her? She shut herself away from others, and became more cold than she had been in her earlier ages. Not to mention that on top of this, her taunting fear of sunning rocks and the river seemed to plague her actions. She froze up when near them, and made a complete fool out of herself quite a few miserable times.
During her times visiting the rocks, she did run into quite the interesting tom, though. His name was Brackenfall; she found herself not being able to remain distant in their conversation, and she tossed her trust at him rather recklessly. The she-cat actually felt herself wanting to be friends with him. A ThunderClan cat, of all clans, too. She also ran into many other cats such as Amberdawn, Copperheart, and a few more. The she-cat felt herself opening up slightly, after being around so many helpful cats. Her views on trust have morphed slightly, and she is trying to be nicer to cats whom she isn't close with. Copperheart told her that Brackenfall has passed away, and she felt like she shouldn't trust cats again. Everytime she tried to open up to someone, they gained bad luck.

(If you don't see your RP up here, it's because it's unfinished, and I don't want to add unfinished RPs for the sake of further plot development.)



|| Physical Information ||




Size || Typical young female-warrior sized
Fur Texture || Oily and soft
Fur Length || Is rather fluffy, but doesn't have extremely long fur.
Body Shape || Average
Ear type/texture || Sharp-tipped ears, very soft
Breed(s) ||
Calico - 90%
Maine coon - 10%
Tail Length || Medium
Scars ||
Facial scar ( across the nose, from her accident on the sunning rocks ), Two back scars ( horizontal on her mid-back, from her accident on the sunning rocks ), leg scars ( back left leg, from her accident on the sunning rocks ), torn ear ( from her fight with the NPC WindClan warrior)

Voice || Deedee Magno-Hall ( Pearl from Steven Universe )
Scent(s) || The river and fish, slightly musky. The smallest hint of pine trees.
Eye color || Pale green
Book description || A calico she-cat with pale green eyes



|| Sexual Information ||




Current Mate || No mate (who knows what will happen, though!)
Ex-Mates || N/A
Kits || N/A
Romantic Interest(s) || Koishine (crush, isn't aware of it)
Past romantic interest(s) || n/a
Orientation || Biromantic, Bisexual
Gender preferences || She-cats/toms
Looking for ||
Long-lasting relationship:

Quick fling:
✕/✓ (maybe)
Cross-clan:
✕/✓ (maybe)
Unsure: ??

Preferences/Turn-ons ||

✓ :
- Nice, calming cats
- Cats that listen to her, and understand her

- Cats that are adventurous

- Someone that doesn't judge her for how moody she can get, and knows how to soothe her
- Cats that will cuddle with her (lmao)
- Dark pelts


✕ :
- Snarky, bitter personalities
- Cats that put themselves above their clan
- Cats that are too cocky
- Boring, shy cats
- Impatient cats




|| Education ||




Past Mentor/Current Mentor: Koishine
Current Apprentice: N/A
Past Apprentice(s): N/A

Strength: ●●●●●○○○○○
Attack: ●●●●●●○○○○
Speed: ●●●●●●●●○○○
Endurance: ●●●●●○○○○
Tactics: ●●●●●●●○○○

Swimming: ●●○○○○
Jumping: ●●●●●●●○○○
Climbing: ●●●●●●○○
Stealth: ●●●●●●●●●
Herbal/Plant/Fungus Knowledge: ●○○○○○○○○○
Kitting Knowledge: ○○○○○○○○○○

Style: ???
Description: TBA

Strengths:

- Has a velvet tread, can sneak up on others quite easily.
- Is well trained in ThunderClan-like land hunting tactics. It is unknown how her mother learned the moves, but they were passed down to Whispersong when she was a mere kit.

Weaknesses:

- Has a hot temper; will do things without thinking occasionally, even when something is reckless.
- Is impatient, which causes her to lose out on opportunities for prey.
- When fishing, her fur is prone to tangle on things. She has to watch out for branches (unless she wants to turn into a tree).

:new:Skills:

- Her light feet make her nearly undetectable, other than by scent.
- Quick to think. She makes decisions as fast as possible when there is no time to dwell.
- Smothering cats with her fluff (lmao).
- Being cranky.




Other info / Facts




Theme song || White teeth teens / Lorde
Playlist || TBA
Quote || "You can't sit here and dwell on the past. You know what I've learned? Pitying yourself for what you could not do will get you nowhere. It happened, you can't change that. What you can change is yourself. You have the power to learn from this mistake, and make sure that it doesn't happen again. Sitting here and loathing yourself for what you could not do will not feed the clan, will not protect the ones you care about, and certainly will not make you a better cat. Becoming stronger will. Now sit up, clean up your fur, and be proud. You are a member of RiverClan. Show it." - Whispersong after Mumblekit's accident.
Fears || Drowning, failure, losing other cats, Being lied to, Being abandoned, Death
Likes:
- Being alone
- Kits
- Swimming
- Tall grass
- Salmon
- Night time

Dislikes:
- Leaf-bare (her dark fur patches make her stand out)
- Ice
- Her father
- Crowds

Favourites ||
Prey: Salmon, carp, mice
Season: No-leaf (color-wise)
Scent: The nursery (reminds her of her mother)
Pastime: Lying by the river(s)
Time(s) of the day: Evening




|| Relationships and Personality ||




Personality || (traits)

{Traits:}
 Bullet; Green { Focused, Caring, Open-minded, Loyal } Bullet; Green
Bullet; Yellow { Brave, Secretive, Prideful, Blunt } Bullet; Yellow
Bullet; Red { Impatient, Hot-tempered, Isolated, Questioning, Rebellious } Bullet; Red

Secretive - Whispersong isn't very open. She will very often keep secrets to herself, and try to deal with her personal problems on her own. When told something that is considered a secret, it will remain a secret with her. If she hears about something, or sees what could be considered a "cross-clan meeting" (as in two cats in different clans having a secret relationship), she won't speak about it if told not to, or unless she's asked about it. This makes her relatively good at avoiding topics and occasionally, lying.

Hot-tempered - Whispersong is very quick to get angry. She doesn't like messing up, and when insulted, she will most likely fire something back. She doesn't like the idea of trying something again (i.e if she fails to do something, she will get frustrated after a few times), and will give up on things that frustrate her, in most cases.

Impatient - Whispersong is impatient. Generally, if someone is taking too long, she will begin to get irritated, and may even start without them to keep herself occupied. She doesn't like it when people take a long time to answer her, and when she was a kit, got frustrated a few times about how she couldn't become a warrior until she was 6 sweeps of age.

Focused - Whispersong is very focused. When in conversations, she will listen, and pays attention to the stories that the elders tell. When hunting, she will focus on her prey, and not her surroundings. Simple distractions will not catch her attention, and she is very good in tasks that require lots of focus.

Caring - Whispersong is very caring. Despite how she may appear, she enjoys the company of kits and others, and cares about other's well being. When praised, Whispersong has a hard time accepting it, and will get flustered and probably say something like "Wh-Whatever" or a very quiet "Thank you". She secretly enjoys seeing others smile.

Open-minded
- Whispersong is very open-minded. When someone else expresses an opinion, she will take it into consideration, and listens to other cat's ideas.

Brave - Whispersong is very brave. She doesn't shy away from dangerous tasks, and will not hesitate to explore a dangerous problem or face the other clan's cats in battles. She doesn't get scared as easily as others would get scared, and would fight hard to protect her clan if necessary. Her bravery sometimes gets her into sticky situations.


Loyal - Whispersong is the type of cat that would die to save someone that she cared for. She's as loyal as a dog (ironically), and takes great offense to betrayal. Her clan comes before all else.

Prideful - Whispersong is quite prideful when it comes to her clan. She may not want to trample on her own pride to help someone else, but may do so if she feels like it's needed.

Blunt - Whispersong will not sheild the truth from someone. She says what she feels, and doesn't think about it beforehand. She says what needs to be said, not what others want to hear.

Isolated - Whispersong commonly distances herself from others/groups as if she's protecting herself. She believes that no one wants to speak to her anyways, mainly because of her nature and way of acting. Most hunting trips that she goes on end up being her by herself.

Questioning - Whispersong questions the word of others, and questions why things have to be the way that they are. Simple-minded orders won't stick well with her, and she often sticks her nose in where it doesn't belong.

Rebellious - Whispersong is quite rebellious. Less so than when she was an apprentice; but she's still got that spark of rebellion in her. She may go against the wishes of others, and if something isn't to her liking, she may go against that as well.




|| Relations ||




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|| Heritage ||





Parents || Spiritwind (Mother), Crane (Father)
Grandparents || TBA
Distant relatives || Marigoldpelt (Aunt, female), Cedarpaw (Cousin, male)
Siblings || N/A
Half-relatives || Birch (Male), Holly (Female)
Ancestor's origins || Mixed origins




|| Roleplay sample ||




reposted from Warriors-BrokenSkies!
Whisperpaw padded along the river's shore, her pale green eyes scanning the landscape before her. It was quite a peaceful night. Too peaceful, really. The gentle laps of the water against the banks was quite a gentle sound, and it reminded her of her mother. It was too bad that she wasn't there to see how she had grown... Shifting her gaze up to the glowing night's sky, she watched silverpelt's stars as they twinkled, feeling a bit more relaxed. Her mother was watching her from Starclan now, and all she could do was carry on. After a few fleeting moments, the sound of a fish came from the river, causing her to avert her attention to the water. A shimmering, plump fish was swimming towards her. That would become a great meal for the clan! Feeling too impatient to wait, the she-cat plunged into the river, her clumsy swimming getting the best of her as she swam towards it. As it tried to pass her, when whipped her head to the side, catching it just by the tip of its tail. What luck! With a flick of her skull, the fish was sent out of the water, hitting the ground with a small "plop". This would do. Once she swam to the shore, she exited the depths of the rushing river, picking up the fish with a killing bite.



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psst do u have designs for whispers parents